show not tell – love it

I`ve started a new read and I love this awesome example of show-not-tell on page 6. I love it so much I have to share it right now, this very minute. It makes me smile big, it`s so cute. There is a lot of information packed into that sentence.

“What are we gonna do now?” Evangeline Jones’s cute four-year-old face smiled over at him from where she leaned into the engine.

Sosimo chuckled as her forehead furrowed, a grease mark smeared across it.

Evangeline is busy helping Sosimo work on her mother’s old clunker. So cute.

She doing such an awesome job she’s covered in grease, lucky for him Mom is pretty laid back about this whole scenario.

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Now that I’ve shared my excitement I can go back to see what other fun things are going to happen in this story.

Check it out I think you will like this book too.

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